Mary Sue Test (Because Hey why not)

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Name: Karia Shadowfire

Karia The Bat Pony Vector by AgentEverfree <da:thumb id="426922835"/> Karia Shadowfire Anthro Concept 1 by AgentEverfree  Karia Series Concepts by AgentEverfree

[X] Your dragon's name has a special meaning. (Depends on which one I'm using, the normal dragon or the Anthro)
[ ] He/She was named after something or someone. [Sun, River, Moon, etc.]
[ ] His/Her name is very unusual. 
[ ] His/Her name is a japanese word for an object. [A word for star, moon, light, dark, etc.]
[ ] Your dragon's name is a combination of his/her parents' names.
[ ] He/She is called by a nickname.

Total: 1

Appearance
[ ] You use another dragon to describe yours. [Looks like Cynder, except...]
[ ] He/She is beautiful, handsom, or sexy. 
[X] Your dragon has a really nice figure. 
[ ] He/She can eat as much as they want and still won't gain any weight. 
[ ] Is loved by others [either to be lovers of just friends] because of his/her beauty.
[ ] Others are jealous of his/her beauty.
[ ] Your dragon looks like he/she should be anorexic, but really isn't. 
[X] Has an unusual, natural eye color. [Red, purple, yellow, etc.] (He has two different coloured eyes)
[X] His/Her eyes can change form. [Slitted, pupilless, etc.] (He's a dragon of course they slit when he is angry)
[ ] His/Her eyes can change color.
[ ] Has an unusual, natural hair color. 
[ ] Your dragon's hair can change colors.
[ ] Your dragon can can change forms. [Dark sides, corrupted forms, etc.]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] Mark a box for each form they have.
[X] Your dragon has a scar with a meaning behind it. (Yeah he has a burn on his face that is permanently damaged)
[ ] Has a certain peice of jewelry that they never take off.  
[ ] Your dragon has weird/unusual markings. 
[X] Parts of his/her body can glow. (Yeah his right arm)

Total: 5

Elements
[ ] Has more than 5 elements.
[ ] At least one of his/her elements are ones you made up. [Love, steel, music, etc.]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] Check each box for each element you made up. 
[ ] His/Her element does not has a limit on how much they use. 
[X] His/Her element is one that is feared by others. (His Element is Darkness in his world that is a element that is know only with dragons that go bad)
[ ] Your dragon has an element that he/she has not discovered yet.

Total: 1

Powers/Strengths
[X] Your dragon has a unique power. [Magic, sixth sense, telekinetic, etc.] (In his world all dragons have there own speicel power but his power Teleportation is not very common)
[X] That unique power is feared by others. (They fear his powers because they don't understand it)
[ ] He/She has a healing power of some sort. 
[ ] He/She can heal anyone from near death. 
[ ] Your dragon has a power that he/she has not discovered yet.
[ ] He/She is or is partially a demon.
[ ] He/She is or is partially an angel. 
[X] Your dragon is stronger than most dragons. 
[ ] He/She likes to fight. 
[X] Wins most fights they are in. 
[X] Your dragon can take down several others at once.

Total: 5

Background
[ ] Your dragon is the last of their kind. 
[ ] He/She doesn't know their parents. 
[X] One of his/her parents are dead. (The different versions have there own stories)
[ ] Both of his/her parents are dead. [The above question doesn't count if this one is checked.]
[ ] Your dragon watched one or more of their parents die. 
[X] He/She ran away from home. (The normal one only)
[ ] He/She raised themselves. 
[ ] Your dragon was raised by the villain. 
[ ] He/She escaped from the villain all by themselves. 
[ ] He/She is the chosen one and must save the world. 
[ ] Your dragon saves the world by themselves. 

Total: 2

0 - 10 Anti-Sue:
You might want to add a few more features to your dragon so that they aren't too boring.

11 - 20 Balanced Character:
Your dragon has a good amount of features and abilites. They don't have too many so aren't too powerful.

21 - 30 Borderline Mary-Sue:
You should take off a few features from your dragon. You don't want to have a too powerful or attractive character.

30+ Mary-Sue:
You should really think through all of their powers and abilities because your character might really annoy some people. Try not to make your character too beautiful or powerful and maybe come up with an original background if you scored low in that category.

Hmm 14 so according to this my character is pushing his balance a bit, well that can't be help as he was designed for his own franchise there the world is different compared to most. 
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